WALT understand the correct structure for a recount.

As you can see, this is my brain storm and my story underneath.

What: Going to my appointment

When: On a sweet warm Thursday.

Where: At the Kawakawa Doctor.

Why: My ingection.

Who: Nan 2 cousins.

How: On a car that can go to

Auckland and back.

This is my story. My 220 word story-line.

Waaka es un jefe ?

Ratu, toru tekau matahi o te marama o Hurae

Te tau Rau mano ma tekau ma tahi.

One beautiful afternoon I was up and feeling

bright for the rest of the day, (Came on guys

let’s go to the doctor, before we miss your appointment).

Yes we are on our way to the doctor, and I am liking it that we

are almost there and I am enjoying it, but we haven’t even

made one little step into the doctor and I am getting this motions.

Thump, Thump, Thump I am in the car thumping my feet,

like I am a elephant walk to your bed after work. If you are

wondering why, it is because I am bored in the back seat doing

honestly nothing right now. I grab my Nan’s phone and type in a

password along the way to the Kawakawa Doctors.

Boom I get into one of the wi-fi and I am set because I am going

to be doing things that will put off so I can’t think about my ingection.

We arrive at Kawakawa and turning now we have the doctors

around the other side. (STOP) Jump out of the car and we are

walking up the steps, pull the door open and make your way to the setting room.